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I am aware this show has a huge fandom and i do think theres a lot of great aspects of this show so I am not here to pick a fight with the fandom. I am not one of those channels shrieking for attention trying to grift off whatever is popular. I think theres a lot of good in this tv show so I am saying this as a critique wanting to get my thoughts out

I am also not interested in

"WELL Those questions were answered on twitter by Viziepops comments!"

or

"WELL! There will be a comic to answer those questions!"

I am not doing homework to understand your setting. If your setting doesnt take the time to explain it then its a stupid garbage giant plot hole and my critique stands

So just a few questions I have that were never answered

1. Why does Adam hate hell so much? He has his chance to fight the devil. The character this stupid setting established as his greatest rival the person who stole his first wife and ruined his life, Adam doesnt even recognize him....................

2. Why did Charlie go from one second saying Alastor is like a father to her caring about her believing in her supporting her and the next second she is like Oh fuck you Alastor!!! It comes off as she is bipolar or has split personality disorder

3. How did Adam become the first Human soul? Well guess we are never getting that fucking answer...........

4. Why was Adam afraid of diversity hire angel? Well guess we are never fucking getting that answer.............

5. Heaven knows about the Extermination. Why did no one go against this. Why does the extermination go through. Why are the two angels including the one against the extermination, just fucking around doing nothing. Just sitting around letting the extermination happen. This is stupid garbage writing

6. Why did no one from Heaven arrive to stop the extermination or even negotiate when they clearly know about this and are against it yet do nothing about it

7. Why did Ser Serpentus go to heaven? Oh i know "WELL! He sacrificed himself so hes good!" to quote Raffiki: "NOPE! WRONG AGAIN!" You literally just last episode went against Angel Dust saying he was a crack head drug addict sex addict thus he cant be redeemed. Ser Serpentus just did all of this alongside Angel Dust so your bullshit makes no sense. By your own logic Ser Serpentus is just as bad as Angel Dust.

8. Did Adam sacrifice himself to save someone? Is that why he went to heaven? If so why was this never mentioned?

9. Why does Claudia or whatever her name is specialize in dealing arms dealing against angels and yet not a single angel is killed until this show. This is stupid. This is insanely stupid. Her entire industry that has made her rich, weapons used against angels, and yet never once has an angel died until this show. Countless exterminations and yet not a single angel ever died until now AND it wasnt even by one of her guns! It was by her stupid ass shoes! How the fuck is this person rich when she sells a defaulty product. I cant imagine any gun dealer ever being successful while selling faulty guns.

10. Why did Lucifer never arrive right at the start? He sang an entire song about helping Charlie. Why did he never show up until the last minute

11. Why was Lucifer vs Adam's fight treated as a joke. This stupid ass show established them as giant rivals who fucked each others lives over and started all of this. The show established that Lucifer trying to give "free will" to Adam - Lillith - Eve is what caused him to get banished to hell with all of the other insane people. Meanwhile Adam lost his first wife thanks to the Devil. YET as mentioned above neither of them recognizes each other and the fight is played off as a joke. Not this epic climatic show down between two people who ruined each other's lives. Adams portrayal in Record of Ragnarok was a million times better then this.

12. Where are the other hell overlords? I got called out being told Well BLA BLA BLA you cant use Helluva Boss characters! Why? Doesnt Vizipop own these characters? Well regardless you had an entire council of leaders. Wheres the cowboy snake spider dude? Wheres the retarded Florida crocodile girl? What did they just fuck off and vanish out of existence? Why werent they involved?

13. Does no one in hell give a shit about this? She only convinced the murdering Cannibals wanting to eat everyone, why did she not convince anyone else?

14. Is IMP literally the only for hire killers in hell? I refuse to believe that which makes me question what... could Alastor and Charlie not hire a fuck load of demons to kill angels? They are both insanely rich so why couldnt they hire demons for the battle? Oh and considering this franchise has a shit ton of demon mafias, yes there clearly are A LOT of demons that are available for hire.

15. Why didnt Alastor use that size growing power against Adam. Seems like that would have been very useful to just squish him like a bug

16. Alastor has teleportation powers which he uses all the time including teleporting Husk around. Why didnt he just go LOL NOPE! and teleport Adam. Seems like that would have been insanely fucking useful. Hell he could have just kept teleporting infinite avoiding Adams attacks.

17. Why didnt Alastor have Husk near him as support. Seems like that would have given him a very big upperhand to counter Adam's flying. just unleash Husk to distract his flying while Alastor does the heavy damage and can Husk even die if Alastor owns his soul? Idk but i imagine Alastor wouldnt care and would gladly use him as an expendable pawn.

18. Why was Valentino ok with Angel Dust being in the fight and like 99% for certain dying. He is obsessed with controlling Angel Dust forever. Why would he just be like eh meh. Whatever.. and willing to forever lose Angel Dust. thats dumb. Thats really really dumb. Why wasnt Valentino going nuts wanting Angel Dust out of this fight.

19. Why is there a giant group of angels in heaven that are like YEAH!! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!! KILL! KILL! KILL!!!! We see Adam giving a speech to the executioners and they are the most bat shit insane lunatics like a bunch of Khorne fan girls taken right out of the realm of Chaos. How in the hell did these people ever become angels. It makes no sense and its just really fucking stupid..... Like how the hell did no one look at one of these lunatics and think what the fuck is going on. Did no one just stop and look at the rabid sociopath foaming at the mouth going kill! Kill! KILL!!! HAHahahaa Do you hear the voices in your head as well? They call for blood!!!! HAhahahha!!!! Did no one in heaven look at these derranged manics and question it....

20. Why was Adam more chill then his second in command. Why was even he like Wo tone it down a bit holy fuck your going way overkill on your blood lust. Well guess we will never get the answer to that question! Cause fuck actually developing characters in this tv show!

Personal Critique

This is just my personal issues. Not right or wrong just my objective opinion.

1. Vaggie getting her wings in a song is the most Steven Universe bullshit ive seen in years and i agree if she got her wings fighting her rival that would have been a lot more epic. A big YouTuber pointed this out and i agree with it.

2. Alastor getting his ass kicked by the dumbass henchman Adam was lame as fuck. Thought he was supposed to be this big ultimate badass but Naaaaaaaaaah gets treated like a little bitch. Oh and you cant make your villain intimidating having them make scary faces and think its a cool moment. Right after they got treated like a whore by their pimp. Getting bitch slapped the fuck out made to look like a joke. Its not intimidating when you get your ass beaten that badly.

3. Ser Serpentus's death was hilarious and you killed any reason for me to give a shit about people feeling bad for him when you played it off as a joke just like the Adam vs Lucifer fight.

4. I cant stand how Valentino is often treated as this sassy Elton John like figure and then they try to have intimidating creepy Valentino. Whoever played the staticy moth like Valentino did an infinitely better job. I absolutely hate how they try to play him off as this sassy flamboyant gay snowflake who looks sounds and acts like he would faint if he got so much as a nail dirty and then they do a complete 180 trying to treat him like the biggest most terrifying monster around.

5. I do not like the actor they chose for Angel Dust. While he is ok. he's ok. They should bring back the true original actor

6. They should bring back the original actor of Alastor. Not to voice him but some other character as the dude is insanely talented.

7. The leader of the Cannibals is literally an Elder Scrolls NPC. Its literally a conversation of Charlie: Come help us. Cannibal Leader: No Charlie: Come Help us Cannibal Leader: Ok. Like its so stupid i immediately just thought of Elder Scrolls NPCs.

8. Adam being killed off after he showed more restrain and more character growth then any other executioner including Vaggie was fucking stupid and a waste Oh and it was also insanely stupid how his death was played off as a joke. I couldnt stand that.

9. I cant stand Nifty. I dont find her funny and her nonstop urge to kill everyone and everything. I find it really annoying. She reminds me of a child with terrible parents and ironically only like Angel Dust is trying to help her get better but i dont find any of it cute just tremendously annoying. I also find her voice insanely annoying. Like i loved the original one getting all cute and adorable. Mixing craziness with cuteness. This one just comes off as completely unhinged and insane she reminds me more of some unhinged lunatic on twitter then a cute adorable girl like in the pilot.

10. The extermination fight happened way too soon and was way too rushed. I Dont give a shit about your introducing the next big villain. Its a cheap lazy and garbage tactic done by hollywood for ages and im not interested in it. I dont care about STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT BIG FIGHT! Hollywood did this with Eragon they did this with M Night Shamalyan Avatar the last airbender. Its a garbage horrible tactic and i despise it. Also in my opinion the final fight sucked

11. The final fight the entire extermination plot was stolen right off of Justice League Apokolpis War. YEs. You 100% stole their idea only this version was so much more lame and stupid. Like i dont care much for the Apokolips War film but that handled the idea of near invincible enemies you kill with a specific type of weapon and your fighting to survive this apocalyptic battle. That movie handled this idea soooooooooo much better not even a contest. Hands down a million times better. Oh and that war also had humor but it was very well placed and didnt make things so awkward, lame, and like an MCU clone.

12. As an abuse victim I found the idea of "joking" about Ser Pentus being raped as tremendously offensive distasteful disgusting vile and sickening

13. I dont give a shit about Vaggie and her identity being Im gay and im Charlies gf isnt an identity. Its shallow vapid and SJW logic of how they dont have a single original thought in their mind beyond who they like to fuck. I dont give a shit about this character and clearly the creators dont either they only care about her sexuality and who shes being sexual with.

14. We could have had more information on Vaggie as an angel but the show spends ZERO Time on this. Oh and we also dont spend any time on the idea of Vaggie being a traitor. They literally get over this IMMEDIATELY! Just Vaggie used to slaughter all of your kind! and in the very next scene ok lets keep working together

15. Charlie was established as this cute adorable girl. It took alot of edging her on pissing her off to make her curse and her cursing was really bad. Now she curses like a sailor. Nothing has happened in the show to warrant her being like fucking cock sucking dick ass munching fucing whore banging anal shit bag fuck stick. Nothing has warranted or justified her just nonstop swearing. Its distasteful and pathetic trying to make me see this character as cute sweet innocent and adorable and yet shes cursing more then most people who call customer service

16. I cant stand how much they fucked over Katie Killjoy and had Brandon Rodgers voice her for god knows what reason.Its so fucking stupid I hate how much they destroyed her character. I dont care if you hated Katie Killjoy. It was fun to hate her. Now shes nothing but hey its Brandon Rodgers wearing a wig cause you fucked over her character beyond repair

Positives

1. I grew to love Ser Pentus. Despite being a new voice actor i really came to love his character and felt like he did an amazing job

2. Alastor steals the show every time he is on scene even when the show screws him over and does him very dirty

3. The guy playing Lucifer does an outstanding amazing job and also steals every scene he is in

4. The Cannibal I hope this works song was ok. Not one of my favorites but it was ok.

5. I absolutely adore Keith David as Husk

6. Hells Greatest Dad is one of my favorite songs ever and i cant stand that Mizie ruins the end of the song

7. Loser Baby is also an amazing song i love a lot.

I am growing an increasing mindset of "This feels familiar........." as i get Steven Universe flashbacks. I know the same dumbass crowd that cheers for the MCU is going to be going AR AR AR AR AR!!!! *seal clap* More mindless jokes! More key dangling! AR AR AR AR! *seal clap* more jokes! Nothing serious just more jokes!!!

I personally think the show has a lot of potential but it often wastes that potential especially as it goes further and further down the Steven Universe endless pit. I would love to see this show balance seriousness and humor and character growth but i feel like i am just going to be ignored for the Steven Universe/ MCU fans who will mindlessly gobble up any key jangling nonstop humor crammed in.

So without a doubt everyone hates SJW characters and SJWs hate characters that are more appealing then them which is just about every person on the planet. I dont think anyone should ever appeal to male feminists like Neil Druckman because they are completely insane. However hopefully people can see this and realize you dont have to have a man woman to satisfy your buff woman craze

so in this comparison we got DoroHeDoro

Here we have Noi

vs Abby Ma'am Savage

Now unlike the completely insane evil vile hateful spiteful Abby who has all the charm of a gorilla in heat, Noi is actually a sweet fun woman. Now im normally not really into big macho buff women. Nothing against you if your into that. Just not something im generally into. That being said. With Noi i can tell she is a woman. She doesnt have the biggest chest ive ever seen. Ive seen much bigger hell ive seen women with bigger chests then her in real life. Yet by her face, her hair, and her chest i can tell she is a woman. She clearly has a very feminine sweet beautiful face. Her hair is wild but looks feminine. At the same time yes she happens to clearly have breasts.

Noi is a likeable character. She plays directly opposite from the main characters. She is also hunting the main characters. Exactly like Abby. This is why i LOVE DoroHeDoro but DESPISE The Last Of It's MA'AM Part 2. Noi is a very likeable character with her own personality, interests, desires, and goals apart from being a crazy psycho American bitch.

If you want muscular women thats fine. There is nothing wrong with that but frankly to make women as manly and masculine as possible is tremendously offensive and sexist. Its basically saying women are dirty animals that must be turned into men. A woman can have muscles and be attractive. A woman can be bigger and tougher then men and yet still be attractive. Also Noi isn't a Mary Sue. She is made out to be a big badass but in her first real fight, she gets her butt wooped a bit. Now granted she still comes out on top as the bigger more dominant fighter but she isn't able to beat her enemy but it shows she has flaws and isn't a perfect mary sue.

id also like to point out DoroHeDoro on Netflix takes place in an apocalyptic setting like The Last Of Us. Except DoroHeDoro the premise is far more unique then just some stupid recycled zombie plot which was original in the first game cause of the mushroom spores but now it's just a generic zombie story. Furthermore DoroHeDoro is about two rouge cards a man and a woman that are basically not accepted by society. Just like The Last Of Us but in DoroHeDoro instead of it being something so unbelievably stupid like Ellie isn't accepted for being gay and everyone hates her because shes gay, theres actual intelligent writers behind DoroHeDoro. Like say of the two one of them has a lizard head and he eats people. While for the girl i wont spoil

anyways go check out DoroHeDoro not The Last of Us Part 2

I really love all the jabs and insults at Mortal Kombat Millenials whatever that game was that trashed all of the Mortal Kombat's origins and tried to appeal to hispter snowflake millenials. I dont know which game that one was but i couldnt stand that game. So i love that this game really trashes on that one. I really love the jokes by Sindel and Shao Kahn

That said i overall really dont like this dlc and would hell no never pay 40 dollars for it

surprising that Shao Kahn and Sindel just openly trust Shang Tsuang without any hesitation. Maybe my memory is off but i always thought Quianchi and Shang Tsuang were always back stabbing treacherous a holes even to Shao Kahn. It kind of surprises me how they would be perfectly ok trusting him

this game does this whole if i hut a shadow clone it hurts the real one but this makes no sense because Shadow version of Wolf dies but regular wolf is ok so this makes no logical sense how some shadow versions are linked but others arent

Its a shame Sindel is yet again evil. I mean i never liked her. I have never liked her character. I thought this would be a chance to finally like her character but LOL guess not! Shes still the same unlikeable bitch ive always seen her as. Good to know we arent even remotely trying to get new people to like her

I really hate how Sheeva was done so dirty in this. Its bad enough she has been utterly ripped of her sexuality. She doesnt look like a woman anymore. She looks like a dude with a Leslie Jones gorilla face. Were that not bad enough she gets killed off in some random duel. Its just implied yep thats it shes dead. How did she die? You fight her like you do every character in this game and then yeah shes dead. How did that happen? Not even Cassie Cage or Sonya Blade die. It really feels like the people behind this game have a major hate boner with Sheeva

I dont know why Kitana and all her forces find out Sindel has betrayed them and they literally dont inform anyone of this. They just kamikazee charge attack Sindel. WHY. She wiped out the entire cast in a previous game! and the game makes note of that. It acknowledges that dumb shit. So why would anyone charge at her? Why wouldn't people be like OH HELL NO FUCK THIS im getting out of here! Why did Koatal Kahn whatever his name is, challenge Shao Kahn. He got his ass handed to him last time. Did he really think this time would be better?

Why did Fire God Kung Lao wait until everything was done and then come in? If they are alternate realties (as hes not affected by the Kung Lao of this universe) why didnt he just come in with all of his people to be like Enough of this shit Shane Tsuang! Why not just come in with all his guys and take out Shang Tsuang. Expanding off of that. Where the hell are all the people in Fire God Liu Kang's reality? Is Kitana still around? Is Raiden still an old man that cant fight anymore? What ever happened to his reality?

THis game throws so many questions it blows my mind

in the final battle what is Sub Zero and Scorpion doing? They were freed from Kronika, are they just jerking off in the corner? What is Jax doing? What is Jacqui Briggs doing? Are they just fucking around? Where is Ebon heart , cowboy guy. Did he just fuck off and decide to not be in the story anymore? I could also say the same for Noobsailbot . Wheres Kollector? Wasn't Kollector all on Shao Kahn's dick, shouldnt he have been there for the final battle?

What happened to the insect girl. Deeva? Whatever her name is. Insect spider girl. Isnt she like the biggest Shao Kahn fangirl ever thats constantly switching sides and constantly supporting whoever is the top dog? Wouldnt she come into this?

This is nearly the price of a full fledged game so yeah maybe i am going to throw a lot of questions when u want 40 dollars. Ive been told nearly all of the budget goes to Robocop's voice actor but i dont give two shits about that! I would only buy the game for the story. I dont care about your multiplayer side characters so telling me we need it to be 40 dollars to pay Robocop's actor, means nothing to me.

Why do the Shokans believe Sindel? ARe they just retarded? Kitana fights with two fan blades. Sindel uses screams and her hair. Their fighting styles couldnt be anymore different. A blind man could take a look at the body of Sheeva and see if there are a bunch of giant fan cuts or not. Sindel says Hey! Kitana did this! So you all have to be on my side now! Did no one actually look at the body to see if there were a ton of fan cuts? Did they just mindlessly believe her? Why does Kitana not expose ANY OF THIS. She just sits there like LOL DURR HURR YEP I GUESS I LOST NOW =P TEE HEE OH WELL SHUCKS. I GUESS THEY ARE JUST SMARTER THEN ME LOLZ =P Kitana was really done dirty in this game. I hate that shes still completely covered up cause god forbid a woman actually look attractive -__- but its worse how she acts like such a moron that just goes with the punches never questioning anything or exposing the stupidity in all of this.

when the marines ar egetting annihilated why didnt they do ANYTHING to tell their allies what was happening? Radioing them to be like YO WE HAVE BEEN BETRAYED! Or maybe a flare gun? Or fuck even shooting an arrow up if a flare gun is too complicated. Im amazed they didnt do anything to notify everyone that they had been betrayed and these are supposed to be modern soldiers.